Here are some comments...  ^_^


On Fri, 12 Jan 1996, Isabel Arantes wrote:

        Part 1, chapter 8: Playing With your Mind, That's All

A bit of foreshadowing?

         "No! My love shall forever remain for Tendo Akane and the
 Pig-tailed girl! No other woman is worthy of this fine soul!"

Wow.  I am amazed.  You really do hate Shampoo.

        "A-A-Akane!" Ranma stammered, stunned. He was expecting to
 see her in another hour or so, so he had not had time to make himself
 be 'mean' to her again. "Weren't you going to the movies?"

What the heck is going on here???

 of the room, took a seat next to Ranma and picked up a rice cake. Ranma
 turned pale and jumped about twenty feet away from her. "My, aren't we
 jumpy today."

And here???  Did I miss something in teh previous chapters?

<<Comercial Break>>

[SNIP]

<<End commercial break>>

Very kawaii!

        "Na-nabiki... what re you doing?"
 
        "I'm just playing with you mind. That's all."

heh.  That bitch.

go to school, and use computer. I spend most of my time waiting
on the computer for some response to my latest chapter. Isn't
that sad? So, to keep me from waiting and never getting anything,
please comment! :)

Jeeze, that *is* sad!  Oops...  ^_^

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