Subject: Re: Comment's about Anime real world and Nick names[spam]
From: RpM-acct2/5
Date: 1/10/1996, 6:22 PM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

From: beaubienrd@mala.bc.ca
Subject: Comment's about Anime real world and Nick names[spam]

I like the set up to the Anime Real world (even though I've never seen the 
real show) and it look's like it has a lot of potential . I just have a 
couple of comment's on how you should pull this off . First , write this 
in 2 different way's the script form and the narritve form . The script 
form should be what the Camera see's and what will be shown on the T.V 
screen . The Narritive should explore what the character's are thinking as 
this happen's .... 

That's what I'm doing so far, right?  Did you want more of the script/camera
form?  Just curious...

Second have an equal number of male and Female character's .....

Tough.  I ain't that familiar with too many anime characters, so I'm trying to
stick to the ones that I've seen a decent amount of hours on.  If I wrote and I
had no idea how that person normally acted, well, let's face it, the fic would
suck further from my enhanced ineptitude ;)

Third , really go wild with the Ranma and Ataru relationship . Have Ataru ask 
how Ranma handles his Harem alot on the TV screen . Basicily Ranma's fiancee's 
should want to kill Him after the end of this show ..... 

That's the plan, kinda...

If you want to listen to some of my character Idea's , there below with 
reason's why there on the show and why the show will make there lives a 
living hell . Feel free to ignore me , most people do ....

BTW, I think that the pay oughta be just one payment (a modest sum) as a bonus
to agree to be on the show.  Getting an actual job should prove interesting to
certain characters.

1) Ranma (you already have him) He's in it for the money . He doesn't relize 
the trouble this show will cause for his curse . Also he should say lot's 
of thing's that will cause his fiancee's to want to kill Him . About half way 
through this Ranma should relize that he his screwed and that when he return's 
home 4 very angry female's will want to kill him ....

Well, actually, he's already screwed, and he knows it.  I plan for Ataru to
be the resident "Mr. Yotsua" type, only much much worse.

Heh heh heh.

Ranma's there to get a break from the constant aggravation of 4 destructive
women that are after him.  Mr. Tendo doesn't mind at all, either, since
the repair bills are less with his absense...

2) Ataru : He's in it for the girl's . This guy should just about annoy 
everyone to the point that they will almost kill him . If he survives , Lum 
should certainly fry him ....

You read my mind... but I figure he's there to get AWAY from Lum's watchful
eye and go nuts on the dates.

3) Mamoru (Tuxedo Kamen) : In it for the money , he's going to unversity . 
Relize's that he will have problem's helping the Sailor Senshi because of 
the ever present Camera.....

Er... never watched it.  If I do include him, He'd have to be "that guy that
never sticks around and is always out and comes in at odd hours blah blah..."
Not too sure on the idea...

4) Urd : What can I say , she's Urd . Expect lot's of mishap's ....She's 
there because Belldandy kicked her out for another one of Urd's love potion's 

Heeeeey, thanks for the inspiration:)  I have another way of getting her into
the show, however.... this oughta prove interesting.

5)Nuku Nuku : There to prove the advanced Andorid technology of Mishima 
industries . Hard to hide the fact she really is a cat , oh BTW did I mention 
Ranma hates cats....:)

I'd think Papa-san would want Nuku-Nuku to get some experience around people so
that she sharpens her social skills, y'know?  'course, having the learning
process broadcast on tv might have slipped his mind...

6)Miyu : Free supply of blood . Just to add some dark humor and an X-file feel..

Hm.... 

er.... 

um... 

well.... 

No.

And now for the spam....

*WHAM*  Spam chopped.

hey, thanks for the C&C!

-Rod M.