I loved this story.  The style of writing was very unique, and did a great 
job of capturing the spontanaity and whackiness of Ranma.  There were a 
few innaccuracies to character...Ranma seems too eager to help Akane at the 
beginning, but pretty minor.
Two things that I think would be interesting would be Ranma's reaction to 
Akane kissing Shampoo and Akane's reaction to Ranma macking on Shampoo.  
She'd be jealous of both Ranma and Shampoo ^_^ (or just Ranma?)
I was thinking of doing the same type of story, with Ranma being 
bisexual, but I didn't think it would be possible to write an interesting 
story unless it was too long.  That you succeeded is nifty.

Jeff

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"Ranma's not a boy...he's a girl!"
"Akane is MY fiancee!  You TOUCH her, and I'll KILL you!"
"Ranma, change back into a boy while I buy you some time."
"But if I seem to act unkind/it's only me, it's not my mind."
"Ranma [sic],/give your heart to Akane [sic]. /Soon,/right away."
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