I loved this story.  The style of writing was very unique, and did a great 
job of capturing the spontanaity and whackiness of Ranma.  

Thank's for the praise....

There were a few innaccuracies to character...Ranma seems too eager to help 
Akane at the beginning, but pretty minor.

I based Ranma's behavior on the manga epsiodes , where Ranma seem's 
to care about Akane . I think this epsiode can be see as relationship 
building , to the I love I hit you level....

Two things that I think would be interesting would be Ranma's reaction to 
Akane kissing Shampoo and Akane's reaction to Ranma macking on Shampoo.  
She'd be jealous of both Ranma and Shampoo ^_^ (or just Ranma?)

Hmm ... This gives me more Ideas :)
 

I was thinking of doing the same type of story, with Ranma being 
bisexual, but I didn't think it would be possible to write an interesting 
story unless it was too long.  That you succeeded is nifty.

Don't let me stop you from writting your story Idea . The idea sound's 
good it just need's to be excuted right ....

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan Forever!!!