Just a few comments on Matt's Sailor Moon fanfic. I thought it 
started off very strong, even making Nephlite more lovable than I'd ever 
imagined (Hey!  You'd feel sorry for a guy who has to put up with pesky 
Sailor brats, cold queens, and Radio Shack salespeople).
	The downside is that it seems to lose steam by the end; maybe a 
strong cliff-hanger would instill interest?  
	Other than that, it shows bright promise, and I'd like to see more!

	--Omega

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