On Sat, 30 Dec 1995, Isabel Arantes wrote:
Ahh, but we don't know that, since Isabel cleverly avoided explaining why
and how P-Ran showed up in the first place. :-)
I told you guys all ready, I'm trying to woek that into the story!
Not to mention I completly missed that part that since Shampoo is there
she'll kill Akane.... *sigh*
I'll probably have to change the ending completly.
No you don't! You wrought better than you thought you wrote. (heh, now
THAT's a bad pun) Leave it exactly as it is.... It's perfect. You may
need to ADD to the ending... Like have Ranma run over near Akane, and
have Shampoo run up to them, stop dead, look Akane in the eye. blink, and
say something like, "Shampoo chase groom some other day.", and leave.
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