| Subject: Re: [FanFic] [fanfic] [A Once and Future Akane, 25+Epilogue] |
| From: "Matt V. Playle" <ue921@freenet.victoria.bc.ca> |
| Date: 12/29/1995, 10:11 PM |
| To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com |
Well, what can I say about this but I really didn't like it. Soo
anti climatic, it was an awful ending.. i demand a rewrite. =) Other
then this chapter the others I really liked.. =)
'I have gone out to look for myself, | - SpaZOO will be here! -
if I should come back before I return | - SpaZOO iz here! -
please tell me to wait for myself.' | - SpaZOO wuz here! -
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-| ...and repeat =)