Subject: Re: [FanFic] [fanfic] [A Once and Future Akane, 22-24]
From: "Robyn, Duke of Amber" <yu120475@YorkU.CA>
Date: 12/27/1995, 8:29 PM
To: Isabel Arantes
CC: fanfic@andrew.cais.com



Jeepers...I'm a reply-aminiac right now...
 I just got back from my parents and decided that sometimes anyplace that 
is 3 or 4 days from the net is a little to far....Not that I'm hooked or 
anything...nossir not me...

On Mon, 25 Dec 1995, Isabel Arantes wrote:

Date: Mon, 25 Dec 1995 16:06:50 -0800
From: Isabel Arantes <terrin@netcom.com>
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com
Subject: [FanFic] [fanfic] [A Once and Future Akane, 22-24]



[Outskirts of Nerima, Night]
 
 
Ranma: *Am... am I really going? Just because some jerk is taking
 over my life? Is that all it takes to make me leave?.... I... I just can't
 believe it. That I'll never see Akane again...*
 
Voice: Ran-chan, wait! (Ranma turns around hopefully, only to have
 a huge dog jump on him)
 
Woman: (Trying to pull the dog back) I'm sorry, Ran-chan here loves
 nightly strolls, and people too... 
 
Ranma: (Staring at the dog) (Disappointed beyond words) ....
 
Woman: (Looking at Ranma) Did Ran-chan hurt you? I'm sorry, he
 can be so vio-

Oh so spooky.... My character in our little Ranma game is a dog... as a 
matter of fact he looks like Baz the neighbours' dog.... my friend Jason 
is sure that the dog in "it's fast or it's free" is somehow me... 
 It's better than a friend of mine whose character can change into a fox 
and works at a beefbowl shop in Tombiki or another friend who somehow 
fell in "the spring of drowned frog".....I still cant figure out the 
drowned frog bit but he gets in trouble at the gormet french resterant alot.


 
Ranma: (Shaking his head, getting up) No, it wasn't the dog that hurt me.
 
Woman: *That has got to be the saddest boy I've ever seen....*


AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

 
 
(Cut to where Akane is)
 
 
(Akane is in a different part of the outskirts of Nerima; she's riding a
 skateboard, and looks extremely worried)
 

Akane on a skateboard SHOULD seem out of character (I've never seen her 
use one) but it works....

 
P-Ran-chan: (Bursting into the kitchen) What's wrong Shampoo,
 scared? (Her grin growing wider and scarier)
 But I've only just begun! 


Sounds like somebody is slipping....  
 
 
P-Ran-chan: (Holding the knife up, in a sing-song voice) Oh, Shampoo...
creepy.....And somehow I can see her  (P-Ran-chan's ) eyes...
 
 
P-Ran-chan: (The horrifying smile returning to her lips) Now,
 Shampoo. (A Glint appearing in her eyes) Now I get you back for
 every piece of pain you've caused me.
 (Brining the knife closer to Shampoo) And for everything you've
 done to hurt Akane.
 
(Shampoo opens her mouth, and lets out the loudest scream she's
 ever given in her whole entire life, a scream filled with fear. This
 doesn't stop P-Ran-chan, in fact it makes her smile broaden.
 P-Ran-chan quickly brings the knife, and Shampoo closes her eyes)

Oh man....if you'dd simply sent out this one and then waited a few days 
people would jus LOSE IT!!!!!

 I love it...the besyt stuff always happens off camera...
 >  
Chapter  24
 
[Black]
 
(Shampoo opens her eyes, to see a shaking and grin less P-Ran-chan.
 P-Ran-chan stands up, dropping the knife next to Shampoo)
 
Shampoo: (Grasping at her heat, surprised) W-why you not kill
 Shampoo?
P-Ran-chan: (Both her fists clenched up, closing her eyes) No. I
 won't. Shampoo, you're the most despicable person on this whole
 planet, but I won't kill you. (Opens her eyes) Now get out of my
 sight before I change my mind.
 

O.K... that's sortof what I thought would happen... well a little ...Of 
course you might have actually done the deed..but I think that would have 
been out of character for Ranma...no matter what she had done.

 > Shampoo: 
(Standing up, limping on her left leg) 
Shampoo refuse go. >  She stay here and kill girl-type Ranma eventually.
 
P-Ran-chan: (Shouting) Shampoo I'm be-
 (Stops, smiles, and starts speaking again) You think it doesn't matter,
 right? Since I'm no longer a male, you can kill me and rise to your old
 glory. (Shampoo nods slightly) Well then, Shampoo, watch closely.
 (Takes a kettle of water from the stove and pours it over herself)
 
Shampoo: (Horror in her eyes) You-you Ranma!
 
P-Ran: Right. I'm male Ranma, the man you love, your
 husband. But your husband wants to KILL you. The man
 you love wants to keep the air out of you for so long that
 you suffocate.
 (Shampoo shakes her head, not wanting to believe it)
 So Shampoo, either you stay here and die by the hands of
 your *cough* lover, or go back home and mend your evil
 little heart. What do you choose.
 
(Shampoo, at this point, couldn't even speak if she wanted
 to. A long, colorless stream of tears runs down her face,
 and she's shaking her head frantically)
 
Shampoo: (Holding her arm out, the other still clutching at
 her heart) Ranma...-
 
P-Ran: Go. 
 
(She gives him one last look, a look filled with confusion and
 distress. She runs out of the kitchen, out of the restaurant and
 out of P-Ran's life)
 
Actually this is WORSE than killing her.....
 

	I really no like Shampoo, though I speak much like her 
right now. Anyway, I think living is a worse punishment than
dying; and I did need something to make P-Ran a little nicer,
he was SUPPOSED to be a nice guy. Though his motives here aren't
all that sweet.


	Isabel Arantes



 Creepy, nasty Ranma action.. and a love story as well....
                                          Neil


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