On Mon, 18 Dec 1995, Matthew Trotter wrote:

in the pond.  Something needed to happen.  It was far to quiet.  Especially 

too.

   There was a little voice in the back of his mind.  He usually ignored 

You should replace 'his' with 'Kuno's'.  It's not clear who you mean.

and then the knife in the back.  <Um, I think your over reacting.>

You're

was a mask of anger, pain and bitterness.  I wish there was something to 
say.

I?  Don't you mean he?

   If felt like winter.  She thought she could see her breath.  Of all 

It.

completely looseing the game to Dispair.

losing.

Akane for driving away Ranma, and Kuno takes both there lives for the dishonor."

Their

   "He marries Ukio and they have three children.  They name their 

Ack!  Ukyou.

   This would really floor Kuno.  He'd really loose his mind when he found 

lose.

akane and ranma are so happyandi'mnotanithurtssomuchtobealoneand.. .>

happyandi'mnotandithurtssomuchtobealoneand

(That one was really hard to spot)

   "Hey Dispair!  Have you seen Doubt?"
   Despair pointed out the northern door.

You keep changing the spelling.  Despair is correct.

[1] Its never a good idea to upset the plans of gods.  Its realy bad if 

really.

[2] Well not in the sence that he had some guardian angel, just that 

sense

   He found Doubt shooting baskets with Anger.  Anger had a big cigar in 
his mouth so it was a safe bet he wasn't in a really bad mood.  "Hey Doubt!"

It took me a few seconds to figure out what you meant by shooting 
baskets.  Very cute!  ^_^

   "I hope your happy now Sarcasm."

You're

   "I'm rarely happy Doubt.  I need you to help me fix one of Fellowships 

Fellowship's

   Doubt looked wearily at the shoe, he'd been hit with his fair share of 

warily

dance.  Your sick.  Stay home and take some Nyquil.>  I can not leave 

you're

finally.  Are you happy now?>  What?  <Opps, I wasn't talking to you.>  I 

oops

   "I hope your satisfied, was it sarcastic and mean enough for you?"

you're

   "SO whaaa.... hey your right, he did listen to me."

you're

strange, but of all the times they had met, all the cloths she'd worn, 

clothes

something like that.  I must be dreaming, this is all way to strange.  

too

hurt she felt.  It was her subcontious trying to "make it all better".  

subconsious

vase containing a red rose.  She was so astonished that she didn't even 
notice the missing picture.

Missing picture?  You planning a sequel?

   I hope you enjoy this story.  If you see any mistakes in spelling 
grammer or whatever, lemme know.  Lemme what you think of it.

I loved it!  BTW, I found a few spelling errors.  ^_^


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