Anyway Kasumi puts Dust number one into Ranma's lunch causing him
        to get horny at school during lunch.  She does something similar
        to Hinako-sensi through some sort of gift (perfume quite 
possibly).  
        The gift is for Hinako's impartial grading of Ranma, else he'd fail.

Nah - try this : He's failing - he thinks that if he gets her a present
she'll relent a little.  Kasumi has placed the dust into a (rather large)
perfume mix.  Ranma doesn't know what it really is, takes some and gives it
to her as a present.  (This also gives you comedy when Ranma figures out
what exactly is happening.)

        This story takes the alternate route that Ranma didn't quit trying
        stop Hinako's ability and has been succeeding for now; Hinako 
only 
        has two weeks (variable) left.  A horny Hinako develops a plan 
that 
        basically makes Ranma have sex with her for the rest of the two
        weeks, that way Ranma won't want to hit her pressure points so 
she 
        can keep her ability.

Have Hinako make the moves on Ranma as he tries to use the pressure point
fix.  That would really confuse him.

        Hinako starts her plan by lecturing him about 
        his test scores while doing suggestive things.  Then she forces 
him 
        into accepting her tutoring.  During sessions she does even more 
        seductive, suggestive things, trying to break down his defenses.  

Ignore this - sounds too much like Ms. Robbinson (old movie)

        Ranma seeking relief goes to Akane.  Akane helps him relieve his 

This works.

        tension but later Ranma is forbidden to "partake" by Genma and Soun
        because of his recent grades(Why they suddenly stress grades I
        don't know), or for some other reason.  This drives Ranma mad 
with 

It's finals - he's onthe verge of flunking - If he does, he has to repeat
the whole year.  Imagine the dishonor involved (for Genma and Soun, that is)
But, have them get on to Ranma's case so much that he and Akane don't have
the time to do anything together.

        into he school and wants to change into a girl so he attempts to 
        dump acid on his head (thinking it's water) when Hinako tosses 
        pencil-boards to knock the acid out of his hands(sorry... too 

The acid is a really weird twist - I can't wait to see how this works out.

much 
        Sailor Moon).  Somehow, the girl chasing him is neutralized and 
        Ranma is eternally grateful.
        He realizes he wants to repay Hinako... 
        badly(yeah, I know... sounds a little like shoving, doesn't 
it?).  
        Insert Hinako love scene.  Ranma finds out it entire scenario was 

This is kinda weak but I don't really know what to offer in replacment.

a 
        setup after he's allowed to "partake" again.  He realizes Akane 
and 
        her sisters are extremely hentai and likes to see Ranma with 
other 

Bad idea.  I think the 'setup' aspect is kinda cheezy.  why not have Hinako
either :

	a) goto the Tendo household to talk to Ranma about class - then run
in to the the Tendo women.

	b) Have Akane, Nabiki, and Ranma run into Hinako at school - She
needs to 'talk' to Ranma - Nabiki and Akane tag along and then everything
happens.

        Hinako-chan too much so how can Hinako maintain her adult form for
        most of the FanFic? (Finds she can absorb hentai energy just as
        easily as battle energy?  The dust increases her chi so that she can
        maintain the form longer?)  Also, I've got a problem with Hinako's

Exactly.  The dust creates sexual energy - so she builds up her own energy
level, also she could 'suck up' other peoples sexual energy.  

        mentality: in the manga she maintains her child-like attitude while
        in the Viz tapes she behaves like a solider (at least that's what
        the Ranma Expanded Home-page says).  Both attitudes are not exactly
        compatible with the nypho one so how should I show the conversion?
        And which of the two mentalities sould I use?

Your story - your choice.


My $0.02 - your turn. 
AlberCrombie
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