On Thu, 14 Dec 1995, White Wolf wrote:

What can I say...
            with a title like that it's gotta be good...
 
 I liked it.

Thanks, but I have another week and a half of finals before I can do 
anything more.

Wha...?  I never saw the story you're commenting on....

(-_-)  And you run this darned thing too (logs).

Here it is again, incase you missed it the first time 'round.

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vis: black screen
cam: steady
mus: none
sfx: none
voc: YOU THOUGHT IT WAS OVER.
msc: have the voice-over echo slightly

cam: cut
msc: cut right after voice stops
vis: Largo, catching a flipped coin, crushing it, then letting it drop to 
     the floor.
sfx: faraway thunder rolls on

cam: cut
vis: black screen
sfx: the coin's clunk echoing
msc: the screen stays blank for another second

voc: YOU THOUGH THEY WOULD NEVER COOPERATE TOGETHER AGAIN.
cam: cut
msc: cut right after voice stops
cam: focus nearer
vis: the KS, on a cliff.  Sylia deploys them with a cut of her hand downward
 Sylia: NAITO SEEBASU, SANJO!
vis: the purple and the blue KS jump off to screen right, the green KS 
     jumps to screen left

cam: cut
vis: black screen
sfx: "SANJO!" echoes away into quiet
msc: nothing until echo is gone

voc: YOU THOUGH EIGHT EPISODES WAS THE END OF IT.
cam: cut
msc: cut right after the voice stops
vis: the KS jet-jump away into the night
mus: chorus of "Bye-Bye My Crisis"

cam: cut
vis: black screen
sfx: echo of the last word, chopped at the cut

cam: fade
vis: computer generated cityscape of Megatokyo [the more grungy, the better]
voc: (smiling tone) Well, ...

cam: parallax pan down
vis: CG medium size glass office buildings in the background, a CG blue 
     KS suit standing on a clear rooftop in the foreground; a passing ADP 
     Wasp's searchlight, sweeping across the scene, causes a glint/camera 
     flare off of the sensor pod
sfx: ADP Wasp, on a flyby

cam: slow pan to stop
vis: center on barrel of blue KS's arm cannon, with the KS's helmet still 
     in the shot

voc: (word-by-word, and serious) YOU THOUGHT WRONG.
vis: as the voice-over starts, the coils on the arm cannon charge up with 
     the barrel brightening up with a red glow
sfx: quickly increasing high-pitch whine
vis: at the end of the voice-over, the cannon discharges
cam: fade
vis: white screen

cam: fast right wipe
vis: (title, black lettering on white background, 30% of screen height) 
     BubbleGum Crisis
sfx: muffled, deep, metallic clang

cam: fast left wipe
vis: (title, right below previous, 10% of screen height) Megatokyo: 2035
sfx: muffled, deep, metallic clang

vis: light smoke blows in from screen left, making visible a light beam 
     coming in from behind the lettering, going towards the upper left
sfx: cue increasingly fast, rushing noise

vis: the light source moves away from behind the lettering, with the 
     light beam continuing to come through the center of the lettering, 
     ending with the light flaring into the camera.

sfx: the rishing noise comes to a cresendo
vis: the lettering becomes white on black background, with an added 
     subtitle, "THE MOVIE"

cam: slow fade to all black
vis: typewriter style "appearing letters" title: "COMING FALL 2035"
voc: COMING, FALL 2035.

cam: hold on titling, then cut
vis: black screen

<end trailer>


   In the audience, in the front third of the theater, a brown-haired young 
woman jumps up with an upraised fist shouting, "Aw come on!  They got 
my colors all wrong!  And do you beleive what they did to my sensor 
pods?!"  Two other women on either side of her pull her back to her seat, 
quietly screaming, "Shhhh!", and, "Have you forgotten where you are?"

   In the last third of the theater, Kandace Otonashi, thought to 
herself, *Sheesh, everybody thinks they're a Knight Saber expert 
nowadays.  Sigh.  If only they could help my department, even if it was 
just once, instead of saving ADP's ass every other week.*

   "Waaaaaaahhh!  It's just not fair!!"

   This got a lot of angry glares from the audience, including the three 
women in the front of the theater, one of which was being choked by the 
other two.

   "Ehehe, did I say that out loud?"

   A very loud, "YES!!" came back from the theater's occupants.

   "Sorry."  *Sigh.  It's just not fair*

   And the movie started.

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Talk to me!!!!!  I know it's not in the least as good as I want it, so O 
need to know what else is wrong with it.

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