Subject: Re: [FanFic] [BGC] Breath Mint Crisis I (V0.3)
From: jhedge@waterw.com (Jeanne Hedge)
Date: 12/14/1995, 5:05 PM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

"Yung (William) Wong" <gon@tsar.poly.edu> writes:

<snip>

Here it is again, incase you missed it the first time 'round.

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vis: black screen
cam: steady
mus: none
sfx: none
voc: YOU THOUGHT IT WAS OVER.
msc: have the voice-over echo slightly

<snip>

  And the movie started.

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Talk to me!!!!!  I know it's not in the least as good as I want it, so O 
need to know what else is wrong with it.


NOTHING!!!

(Is there more to go with it?)  :)



Jeanne Hedge

jhedge@water.waterw.com                
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