Well, Nabiki, it's impossible to give any useful commentary on a story that 
is so far purely an introduction, but I like what you've got so far.  Looks 
like yet another happy-go-lucky Ranma fanfic ^_^...geez has any author 
here never written in the death (or at least some serious tragedy) of a 
Ranma character?
The only thing I can think of saying is that the double-spacing was annoying.

Jeff

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"Ranma's not a boy...he's a girl!"
"Akane is MY fiance!  You TOUCH her, and I'll KILL you!"
"Ranma, change back into a boy while I buy you some time."
"But if I seem to act unkind/it's only me, it's not my mind."
"Ranma [sic],/give your heart to Akane [sic]. /Soon,/right away."
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