Rod wrote
 

Oh well, I hope I can write out the sequel alot better, 'cause the more I look
at TMTC, the more I see room for improvment.

The writer frequently is his/her own harshest critic.  I liked the whole
thing, in fact I printed it out so I could read it in my favorite reading
position (on back, pillow support, general "kick back" mode)  I don't do
that for just any fic.

Ben L. Harrison - HM1(FMF) USN
Harriso3@ix.netcom.com
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