On Mon, 11 Dec 1995, Gustavo Cordova Avila wrote:
*phew* what do you think? It took me a *long* while
to get this in form, but I really like it, how about you?
This the beginning of chapter 0, Preludes. Depending on what
you think of it I'll keep on writing.
I agree: *whew*! I like the concept. I presume you are going to meld
this with the Ranmaverse we all know and love, eventually.
Very well written, so far. Will we get to learn more about the girl and
her friend and the horde chasing them later in the story? (It's a fair
question, since they are all dead now!)
It occurrs to me that it isn't really necessary for the Drowned Girl to
have a pigtail; isn't that just the way Ranma happens to wear his hair?
Actually, it's kind of hard to imagine what the girl might have looked
like, come to think of it, as isn't Ranma's cursed form identical to his
normal form except for gender? Oh well, skip those parts: Jusenkyou
physics bend freely to conform to plot demands and there is no reason for
your story to be an exception. :-)