[Pt. I]

Nodoka:  [Re-introducing everyone]  "This is Ranko,"  [pointing to a
        young girl with red hair tied in the back with a pigtail, with
        green eyes] "and this is Ranma." [indicating a young girl
        with red hair tied in the back with a pigtail, with blue eyes]

[...]

Nodoka throws the water on the three leaving a red-haired blue-eyed

                                                 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

girl, a black-haired blue-eyed boy, and a panda.

  ^^^^
	Shouldn't Ranko turn into a green-eyed boy?  That had me pretty
confused through most of the first part.  Also, I know this is probably
beside the point, but couldn't Ranko and Ranma each just have cured
themselves by jumping into the spring the other fell into?

[Pt. IV]

All Kasumi could think about was Dr. Tofu.  It was ridiculous!  She
didn't even know his first name!

	Tofu *is* his given name; his family name is Ono.

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"I will chide no breather in the world but myself,                 _____
 against whom I know most faults." - As You Like It         |_____|_____
                                     Act 3, Scene 2    _____|     |
            Julian Fong: fong_jh@sunset.bph.jhu.edu