Ohhhhhh....
        This hurt before but now....It just seems to get worse...
    I hesitate to suggest this (because you are writing this and not me) 
but maybe something very silly should happen... or a couple of little 
sillies to break up all of this. It's heavey (I know it's supposed to 
be...and I think you have still got it Ranma-ized well enough) I just 
think a little smigen (sp?) of levity would not hurt. 
 
                                       Or this could be post-exam shock
                           
                                           Neil

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