I think you almost got it.  It does seem to be lacking a little more
zany-ness.  Why not have them do something, like take over the Replicant's
instruments and 'help out' with the song.  (Imagine Konwa No Hurricane with
Wakko on Drums, Yakko on guitar, and Dot on backup vocals *shiver*)

Other than something like that, I think it's fine.

BTW: You do need to add the most distructive force known to mankind : 

	an excited Runt-bumma (with Rita-bumma)

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