I like the story, a lot. But it does seem like
you're moving just a *tad* too fast. Maybe filling it up
between scenes? I loved the idea of Ranma's daughters, and
none of them with Akane! Neat.
	I like your idea of the Magic notes at the end of
each chapter. I think I'm going to have to do something like
that :)
	Keep it up!

-RangerElf