Hi Damon,

  I "just" got through reading the two chapters you posted to the raas.
  Also checked out the prologue.

  After scanning the first chapter, I noticed it was something I had
  already read, but seemed confusing before.  I just read it again.

  Comments? Well...

  The prologue kinda helps if the reader read Vol 2.  Why? Because vol 2
  seemed to kinda... well... take on a Voyager(tm) kinda mood... only
  the would-be captain isn't quite so domineering... (sp?)
 
  I found Vol-1 to be of great interest... I had expected him to stay with
  Weya and live with her... with the request for the fins and all and how
  they can communicate via their gear...

  Vol-2 seemed to get _real_ deep into the angst bit... frustration
  comes to mind...

  I get the impression (and I hope I'm wrong), that the rest of the series
  might be like vol-2 where he goes and "fathers" and "mothers" the little
  earth-like dying or troubled worlds... *shiver*  "just like" ST or STNG
  or  *more shivers* Voyager... -_-

  But nice ship.... at least what little was mentioned of it.  I really 
  didn't get the imagery of something sleek, powerful, and blue...
  I rather got the impression of some "thing" like the 'Heart of gold'
  from HitchHikker's Guide to the Galaxy... something shiny and 
  in-describable and powerful and soon to be out-dated by a flying/moving
  resturaunt... -_-

  Nice scenes with Kerin/Damon and Weya/Damon, but most of the other parts
  seemed to be centered around his need to kill himself. *sigh*  Blue 
  seems to fit there... ^_-

  Other than that, I like the concept of salvaging tech from other worlds,
  but the crew seemed to have everything done so "perfectly"... of course,
  the tales of crews that "failed" are never told, now are they? *smile*

  Anyways... I found the character Weya to be touching, if brief.

  Nagisa/Wing.

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