:The fanfic wasn't bad... once I ran it through sed to get rid of all the
:spaces before the punctuation and fmt to clean up the paragraphs.  The
:idea is cool, but the actual presentation needs a little work :)  

Probably the program . I use Micrsoft word up at the college and I have 

		      ^^^

He's talking about this.  You're not using correct punctuation.

*Groan* Geez , I really gotta work on that punctuation . Oh well , 
least I can correct it before I release it to the public .

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien