Subject: Re: Ghost Tails Chapter 17.1 BETA
From: Aaron Stolz
Date: 11/7/1995, 4:42 AM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com
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Aaron_Stolz@cyberstore.ca

      Ranma had an idea, he would give Sankkei a free shot, but 
maby, just maby, he could finish this fight without being killed.  He 
  ^^^^
Maybe

      "Tenshin Amiguru Keru," Ranma yelled as his power kicked in. 
         ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Tenshin Amaguriken

      Ryoga instintely began to glow,"He what?"  
              ^^^^^^^^^^
Instantly

      "SHE SHE... HAGODA," With a bright flask of light, the a beem 
         ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
This was the worst one I saw...it's Shishi Houkoudan


All the other mistakes were most probably typos or too minor to note.


Aaron Stolz
aaron_stolz@cyberstore.ca