Subject: Re: [fanfic] [Tittleless 6 (Now 'A Once and Future Akane)] |
From: Brian |
Date: 11/6/1995, 8:09 AM |
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com |
ok, just read Chapter six... very good... as little as i would like to admit, i did kinda cry at the end of the chapter... Are you really 11 - 13 ?? If you are you need to look into a carear in writing. Your GREAT! Anyways, only thing out of character is, Akane saying BITCH... just seems out of place for her... but, it still works for ' story effect. ' Anyways im reading C7 now, so... see you soon... later IA --- Brian ( Sage ) "Curse those evil Octopi" http://www.igc.net/~ranma204