1)  I thought cat-form Ranma was supposed to be invincible.  It seems to

me like (s)he was taken out of the battle far too easily.
	See what I said to Brian's post.

2)  If Ranma is going to travel down the dark path of revenge, why didn't

he attack Cologne, too?
	Cologne has only encouraged Shampoo, she wasn't the one
that arranged/suggested the fight, or the killed Akane. Ranma
helps his enemies when they absolutly need it, not kill them.

3)  What have the police been doing all this time?

	I hate to say this, but this is Ranma. Ranma doesn't
have police, and I think it would ruin the story if I included
them. But if you really must know, think of them as the 
type of police in Simpsons, who do nothing but eat donuts
all day. (If any policemen/women are reading this, no offense!:))

I like your writing, and your story (even though I did think it

was a happier tale when I first saw it... oops).	
	I'm not about to make Akane's death bright and cheery,
but once PR finishes about what had happend to him in the
past few weeks/days, I'm most likely going to return to 
something lighter. (But you can bet that I'll return to
the gloomier side at least once more... I like to
explore.)


	Isabel Arantes