The Good:
 Vey interresing fic lad. I am not the kind of person that reads a
fic unless it can capture my interest, yours did.

The Bad:
 Unfortunately we always tend to play favorites in our fic's. The characters
we dislike usually don't appear or appear as two dimensional characters or
out of character.
 Last chapter portrays Shampoo out of character. Shampoo would never resosrt
to cheap tactic like turning into a cat to make Ranma run away. She
would have fighted him with her own resources.
 I know you wanted to put Shampoo in a situation where Ranma (and basically
any martial artist) could kill Shampoo. Another solution would have been
portraying a Ranma so mad he would pour chi from every pour of his body
and started to throw ki blasts a la NMC. Then Shampoo (and probably
a good part of Nerima) would be toast.

The Ugly:
 That's my two pesos wrth (I hope you were old enough to give your opinion
on my fic :( )

Ricardo Martinez Garza