Vey interresing fic lad. I am not the kind of person that reads a

fic unless it can capture my interest, yours did.
	I'm honored. ^_^ 

I know you wanted to put Shampoo in a situation where Ranma (and basically

any martial artist) could kill Shampoo. Another solution would have been
portraying a Ranma so mad he would pour chi from every pour of his body
and started to throw ki blasts a la NMC. Then Shampoo (and probably
a good part of Nerima) would be toast.
	I don't pay nearly enough attention to the martial
arts section of Ranma1/2, so I don't know much about ki
blasts.

Last chapter portrays Shampoo out of character. Shampoo would never resosrt

to cheap tactic like turning into a cat to make Ranma run away. She
would have fighted him with her own resources.
	I think she would have done that with any other person,
but she knows all too well that Ranma is *much* better than her,
and she wouldn't want to hurt him if she could help it.

That's my two pesos wrth (I hope you were old enough to give your opinion

on my fic :( )
	Which one? (You're not the one that wrote the fanfic where
Ranma married Shampoo, Akane and Ukyou, are you? You make it sound
like that, anyway.)

	Isabel Arantes