Great story so far, one minor correction :

"I'm not saying you did Ranma...just that's what he said."
"I wonder what he was throwing at us?"  Ryouga picked up one of the

Shouldn't this be ranma?

projectiles.  It was only a few feet from him.
"Now that's funny...just pieces of cloth."

I can't tell where this story is going at the moment though,
(which is probably a good thing). If Ranma and Nabiki are going
to get closer where does this leave Akane? Being a shameless
Akane fan I'd be a bit upset if she was now 'dropped' by ranma.

Still, this is an interesting new love triangle in the ranma
universe I haven't seen before, so keep it up!

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