On Thu, 2 Nov 1995 beaubienrd@mala.bc.ca wrote:

Just finished reading WillA in the long backlog of Fanfic's in my 
Mailbox , and aside from the text wrap the story was a very good 

Fixed in the latest version (text wrap that is)

Ranma 1/2 drama (I did not like the power Ranger commerical , though . 

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So? :)

I don't think it has a place in a serious Fanfic , IMSO ) ,

That's why it's at the END!

How much reasearch have you done on the pscholigcial effect's of rape 
on woman ? From the way your story read's , it sound's like you have 
at least done some research on the topic , and your Fanfic resolution 
may depend on some research done on this topic . 

Onna-Ranma's reaction is based on the experience's of three (female) 
friends of mine, two of whom were raped, one who came awfully close. One 
of the three was a martial artist (red belt, Tae kwon doe). None of them 
lost their memory, but I used them as a basis.

Also , I did not like the way Ukyou reacted initaly to Akane . IMHO , 
Ukyou doesn't hate Akane , and therefore would not react the way she 
did when Akane visted Ucchan's . 

More on this later in the story... she is already acting a little more 
normal as of chapter 7, and chapter eight will see more happening

But everthing considered , it's a good Fanfic . I would like to see 
the new Shampoo/Akane relationship explored in future chapter's 
though . 

Rest assured, you will.

Want the latest version? ftp to 'ghost.res.cmu.edu' in /pub/users/eos
and pick it up.

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