On Wed, 1 Nov 1995, Isabel Arantes wrote:


So... some guess have been correct after all....
           the ole "guy from the future sketch" ...no wait...
 that was something else.....

Date: Wed, 1 Nov 1995 12:19:31 -0800
From: Isabel Arantes <terrin@netcom.com>
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com
Subject: [fanfic] [Tittleless, 4]


	
	Is this better? Can everyone read this now?

 Yup...
   But my mailreader liked the old one as well

 
Akane: Er, today is July 1.
 
Ranma-chan: (Surprised) No, it isn't. (Akane points to a
 calendar. July 1 is circled) Eh?

Why is it circled?
 Something else happen today?

 
Akane: Sure it wasn't some other day?
 
Ranma-chan: (Angry and upset) Are you trying to say
 that I don't remember the date of the most important day
 of my life?
 
Red-Ranma: Most important day of your life?... Wouldn't
 that be finding a cure?
 
Akane: When you got cursed?
 
Genma-panda: {I know, the day you married Akane!} 
(Red-Ranma baps his father's head)

Now that's funny.....

	Ok, ok! So I went for the cliche. (Didn't I say
I'm not creative? ;)) But I thought this up months ago,
before everybody pulled their axes out of the closet. :(

I wouldn't mind seeing a little bit of drama...and comedy watching 
everyone treat Akane with kid-gloves...
As long as you have a here-and-now Akane (...how's this for a tittle "A 
once and Future Akane" ...well I tried.) alive at the end of the 
story...the last couple of stories had a bit of a darker spookier Ranma 
which I wasn't sure I liked no matter how good the 
quality of the writing... > 	 

I'm starting to think that Purple-Ranma (I 

have > to think up a name for him! ANy suggestions?) isn't

quite right, for a Ranma that has seen Akane dead. But
then again, he thinks this is all a dream, and sees
a realistic (Maybe even real ^_^) Akane, so would
that change him as well? Argh!

Maybe a bit more bitter...The one he loves is gone and he can never get 
her back.....well untill this new fresh chance....I can see both of them
competing for her....one because he knows what he's missed and is 
unwilling to do so again and the other because...well because he's 
stubborn.

	 Maybe I ought to 

change this 'important' > event, since up to now I've been told that this

fanfic is funny (you have to understand that this is a
small miracle for me :)), and death, especially Akane's,
isn't. 

Well the idea of CHANGING the past might be a good one...
 I mean seeing Akane die is fine and good....if she can avert it the 
second time... I could ever deal with a good nightmare....what if the 
future Ranma is afraid to tell anyone what REALLY happens...they will all 
be on their toes....maybe her cooking did it?? ;)

I'm hoping to post this 

and all the previous > chapters on r.a.a.s ASAP, so could someone help me

with any questions? You're the only critics I have,
I'm too embarrassed to show this to anyone outside
the internet.
	Oh, and thanks to Bruce, who's given me a lot
of help, and everybody else that's commented. (No
flames- yay! ;))

A helping hand is always a good one....
 

	Isabel Arantes

ps. To thse that still don't know it, I'm a _girl_.
Just look at my name. 

The name still looks like a girl's name to me...
                                                      Neil

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