Cool fanfic.
	Normally I'm not too keen on stories that are based around the 
addition of a new character.  Most of these new characters end up as 
Ranma-class fighters (or better).  I was impressed by you making your 
character Kuno-class, a more "reasonable" skill level for someone just 
wandering into Nerima.
	Something about the Ranma-Nabiki fight is bugging me.  I can't 
really see Nabiki trouncing Ranma, even in a practice duel with him 
caught by surprise and underestimating her.
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