If you are, as you claim,

going in for the death, gloom, and despair, maybe you should keep it out
of the main plot and explore the dark, depressing universe of the
alternate Ranma.  Then again, maybe I should stop second-guessing the
author and just take it as it comes. ^_^
	I'm not all that sure what I'm going for anymore. I don't
even know what the fourth chapter is going to be about. But most
likely Ill have a mix of the two, if that's possibe.

Part 2 is where I expect to see your

creativity shine through.
	And that's where it isn't! I'm not all that creative,
so don't get your hopes up in that department.

Did Nabiki get Kunou to eat Akane's homemade poison by telling him that

Akane had made it?  If not, it's a SURE way to get the big lunk to scarf
down that food.  "My sister's poisons..."  ROFL!
	It just about killed me, Nabiki the smartest person 
in the series, that she couldn't find a convinient way to
rid herself of Akane's cooking. 

	Isabel Arantes