On Tue, 24 Oct 1995, skyknght@sentex.net (Bert Van Vliet) wrote:

Okay folks, here's the latest update.
Let fly with the commentary!
Sayonara!

As always very good.  Just one part I found a little awkard (when Madigan and 
Quicny are talking:

all convinced now that he's completely crazy, and won't work
with him at all, even under pain of termination of their
employment."  Madigan had herself briefly visited the

Might want to change that to "threat of termination of employment."  No pain 
in losing you job.  Life yes......


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