Hay, this story is great!!  But... silly me eraced the first 8 parts.... Dodekain read me the first part over the phone ( thanks Dodekain ). so im left wirh a.... little gap in the story... could you please send me the WHOLE thing again.... i know it may be a pain, but I like your writeing, it's better than mine :| ( the boulder thing was some of the best writing i ever had the pleasure of roleing on the floor laughing my ass of at ) <----- some good stuff!
        Anyways, please resend them to me ( ranma204@igc.net ).  As to the matter of it being hard to read... 1) its a BETA copy 2) i think the way you take each ( every ) character and mold them into the plot is amaising.. a true work of skill... i can't wait to read part 10 and beyond..... keep up the great work, and resend me the first 9... thanks,        
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"Curse those evil Octopi"                  
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