I like it a lot as for plot.  The story itself was a little confusing.  It
kinda ran here for a while and then there for a while.  Maybe a slight
reorganization of someparts to keep things a little simpler.

I wish I could give specific situations, but with a story this long, I can't
keep track of when things like that happened.

Also, I think it was in the first 3 parts - you used 'pricipal' instead of
'principle' -- Remember the principal is your 'pal'. (annoying spelling
trick learned in grade school).

Keep up the good work
AlberCrombie
                                                                           
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