I read it, took me a few hours... I need sleep badly... I have work
tomorrow... but I finally finished... I liked it, started to lose me after
the fight/memory lapse/wandering thing.  I liked the beginning a lot more
than the ending, it seemed alot more coherant... it took me a couple of
chapters to catch some of the joke but they had me rolling.  If it weren't
for the ending song I might have had to hunt you down for that ending...
but then the song kicked into my head and it was cool.
        I'll try to be more coherant next time, were some of the chapters
in the wrong order?  Anyway, I haven't read a good monster since Chesai.  I
bow to everything you've accomplished.  I'm going to sleep now, I'll
probably reread it tomorrow and say something more constuctive then.

           --.\\ousse \_ee
   mousse@pixi.com
   http://www.pixi.com/~mousse/
   "Ora no waza o, tejina yobawari suru ki ka?"
   "Still deperately seeking Shampoo."