Sorry to take so long in reply



Damon Jason Casale  wrote:

I've never seen Dirty Pair.  Kinda hard to comment.

Well read it anyhow, I want to know what I need to do to improve.

Um, I deleted it from my mailbox already.  If you're really desperate for
comments, resend it and I'll take a look this time.

I remember how I felt when no one seemed to be reading mine.  (although
mine wasn't a fanfic/based on anime)

What I've posted so far in in ftp.std.com under the gz file "Two Pair Beats
Everything"

* Maison Ikkoku * Kyoko Otonashi * Video Girl Ai * Amano Ai *
               * Blue Lightning * Kerin Gray *
Blue Lightning forever...Kerin, are you out there?