"Try me," she invited.  Bert stared back at her for a
moment, gazing searchingly into her eyes.  Sylia watched
grudging acknowledgement of the fact that she was indeed
serious appear in his eyes.

        I think there is something wrong with this sentence. It's not clear.

            HARDSUIT FORCE-FIELD DEFENSE SYSTEM
                    PRELIMINARY DESIGN

        Ohh Yeah! this should be real COOL!! I can't wait to see what Leon
is going to do!

Charles C. Liu
charlesl@manhattan.thirdwave.net