On Mon, 16 Oct 1995, White Wolf wrote:

I'll try.  Both of you have written using the same characters before.  
I'm talking about the way you treated them.  Hitomi wanted to write about 
the relationship between them.  You wrote about what was happening around 
them more.  

*hems and haws...*

I did spend several years writing romance novels...

*blushes*

I guess that training carried over.  I'll try to have a more rounded view 
of the characters in future.

Ichinohei Hitomi
Hitomi@escape.ca