Hi there!

Overall, I think I liked it.  My only quibble would be with the 'cyber-bar'
stuff.  For someone to be actually drunk, you'd have to physically ingest
alcohol.  I don't think that sending a few signals to your brain would have
quite the same effect.

Minor quibble, like I said.  I'll post again If I have any additions.

Sayonara!

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