Nothing really wrong with it, but I'd probably be more interested in a 
Dirty Pair, <Ducks> Erm.. Lovely Angels meet the Smurfs fanfic, personally.

I've some just plain SICK Smurf stuff on the net, and what with Priss 
grabing Smurfete, I'm assuming/hoping this won't go into that vain.

Bruce

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| Bruce R. (just call me Ryoga) Brunk       | All those animals.            |
| Lake Oswego, Oregon                       | People eating Akane's cooking |
| Senior Systems Engineer, FEI America, Inc.| and liking it....   Something |
| brbrunk@agora.rdrop.com                   | weird is going on here!       |
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