You wrote: 

Interesting story, unfortunately it was hard to follow.  Good concept 
however, and I would like to see more of it.

Ichinohei Hitomi
Hitomi@escape.ca

Evening all,


            Thanks for the compliments. I would have replied sooner but 
family was running around with heads cut off to get ready for grandpa
s b-day. Cake anyone? I think I can slide it through the line I've got. 
;)
            Unfortunately I started on the fan fic (beginning) that was 
the third story in. And then proceeded to cram as much info as I could 
into. The prologue was originaly 6 pages. I think my brother best 
described it: I've got the all the letters of the alphabet (sp), I then 
proceed to cram A-Y into a short story. A character list would have 
helped a lot that and a score card. I happy you liked it.
            The original idea was to have the kids get knowledge ect 
ect ect sent into the part of the brain that we as humans can't use. I 
kinda like the bracelet idea more, I could do most stuff with it.
            Since I will have time tomarrow, I'll get a character sheet 
together and a short history of some of the things going on. Does 
anyone have any other comments on the Beginning, pros, cons, anything.
            Big thanks to WW for posting it. Baka Cola and a bag of 
Chocolate Bickys (sp?) for you. Tanks a bunch. :)

            3 _bags_ of oreos Hitomi, 3 _bags_???? (wide eyed).  Would 
hate to see you with Combos....;) Where do you work again and what do 
you do? Sides, drink a ton o coffee and 3 bags of oreos to get the 
brain flowing. The Sisterhood was good I liked it. So when are you 
going to be at Boarders and we can say we remeber you when? ;)

            Dunno about this pun war guys...this could get nasty. 
(scratches head and ducks for cover) I think tho it already has.


           Goin back to lurkin and writin, (aiieee run away!)


            Bentley