Hi Hitomi!

Well, in my humble opinion, it stands very good as is. I think that the idea
you raise of the characters questioning thier sexuality is valid and well
done.

I enjoyed the glossary, as always and you answered part of a question I
hadn't gotten around to asking yet. The part that was answered was 'what is
in Miso soup'. The second part to that question is 'I take it that it's
standard breakfast fare, like westerners eggs and bacon? Or is it like the
Mexican pot of beans which is just left on the back burner on low simmer for
anyone to snack on when they need to eat?'

And I know a little about the way that the Japanese pack lunches, but some
others may not and might find this interesting. Just a thought.

As always, good work!
Thanks for sharing it.

Shannon