Its really funny so far, but i think you let some of the characters slip out
of character alittle. I.E. akane calling ranma a trans-sexual, would she
ever say that? And Soun saying " Akane your so mean " it just does not sound
like a Soun saying. But what do i know ??  Still, its really funny {girl
1-200 etc.}  i can't wait to finish it, i was to tired tonight to read the
whole thing.
Your opionenator,
                  Brian ( SAGE )
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"Curse those evil Octopi"