Subject: Re: A Son's Duty, Chapter Six
From: For Love of Peorth
Date: 9/26/1995, 1:59 AM
To: fanfic@andrew.cais.com

On Tue, 26 Sep 1995, Hitomi Ichinohei wrote:

On Mon, 25 Sep 1995, For Love of Peorth wrote:

Wow... all I can say or think is... wow... poor Ranma and friends...

I guess I went a little bit too far didn't I.

NOOO!!!


Should I remove and replace that section?  It does seem to go a little 
far after all.  I was also in a writing frenzy when I wrote that over two 
months ago.

What does everyone think?

Hitomi

No.  Please don't take it that way!  

Yes, it's rather a nervous and tight spot for the three, but it isn't 
a corner!  I was just commenting on the first impressions I had!

I repeat, please don't rewrite or remove. Please. 

I'm sure Ranma can explain it through with something like the combat
match with Kodachi during the earlier tv episodes... Something like 
Ranko calling herself Saotome Ranma.  

The comment was influenced by too many Barbecue Chips.  The MSG is still
running rampant and the early morning cartoons of "Garfield and friends"
was there also.  :)

The scene is ok.  Not extreme.  Besides... hmmm I'll stop here.
I'm starting to spew ideas and such that might influence the normal
outcome of ... ( prime directive from StarTrek...)

Whoa... MSG....

Wing. [ Be smart, don't start.  Please don't do MSG ]

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