Hay, keep writing, dont let BAKA people descourage you.  Your story was ok,
cute is the word.  If you enjoy writing than ignore people that have nothing
positive to say.  Your not bad for your age / skill. Give it some time, and
alot of bad storyes, and i think you may turn into an excelent writer.  JUST
KEEP WRITING, OR ELSE :)
Never stop doing what you enjoy,
                                Brian (Sage)
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"Curse those evil Octopi"

Hello this is the writer of that contreversal Fic about Scooby Doo

and Ranma. I have an excuse for writing a fanfic that wasn't that great.



1. I'm only 15 and haven't been through any collegde writing courses

many of you guys may have been through.



2. I don't like to write things seriously, I just like to come up with

gags. I also like to adapt old vaudville-type jokes to Ranma.



3. I aeNew mail on node BOS1G from IN%"ranma@usagi.jrd.dec-j.co.jp"

3. I ate to much Smurf Cereal when I was younger.



4. I watch to many cartoons, even now it is difficult to tear myself away

>from Scoob, Smurfs, Popeye, BH, ect

Okay now here are promises I will make for future projects:

1. I will keep my "Faulty Towers" scripts by my side as a reference for
format, and if I want resurect some old bits.

2. I will rework and rewrite things instead of writing them in one
night and posting them the next day.

I'd like to thank the ML for existing, because if I handed this kind of
stuff in to my teachers, I'd probably get a bad grade and a call home.

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Noah "Evil or Hilarious?" Bellamy