On Fri, 22 Sep 1995, Hitomi Ichinohei wrote:
Kuno Tatewaki was not in a good mood.
Someone new was after one of the girls that he had declared to be his. A
girl that he, a Sempai, a descendant of Samurai, and the best of his
generation had every right to. For someone to flout his authority over
these matters was not to be tolerated.
Doesn't Kuno know who Ukyou is?
Of course, Tatewaki still had not realized it was now the twentieth
century.
He also had not realized that most women, even in Asia, would not tolerate
his attitude unless they were thought that their only source of self
confidence came from being owned by a man.
This is only an observation, but you don't seem to like him. You are
going to have a hard time writing parts with him in it until you begin to
like him.
For Tatewaki, he considered himself to be absolute master of everything he
surveyed. Every person, every being except for the gods had to bend to
his will, his whims and fancies. Even then, if he considered himself in
the right, The deities had to give way. He was the best person, one
without peer, one without rival for he was the ultimate of men.
He was also a conceited pig.
Yup...
That morning, Tatewaki had arrived to school earlier than usual,
practising harder, longer, and with greater precision that he ever had
before. For one to try to take his woman, the girl of great feminine
beauty and charisma, one who was above all others was to court death. He
was sure that her namesake, the uncouth Saotome had something to do with
this. The man was a demon who had taken the girls maiden self and now
sent her off to another.
Hold on a second here... You realize what you are implying?
He had of course bought the pictures that Nabiki had tempted him with the
night before.
*I shall wait for them both. I have already sworn that Saotome will
suffer for his enslaving of women, but this new _boy_ will feel the wrath
of the Blue Thunder. I shall not tolerate any going after the Goddess of
my heart.*
I'd drop the emphasis on boy.
He stood waiting for the students to arrive, wanting nothing more than to
teach a hard physical lesson to the young man who dared approach Saotome
Ranma.
This is a truly ironic statement. The fact that Kuno is utterly unaware
of what he's thinking (like always) is very amusing.
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