| Subject: A Son's Duty, Chapter Five. |
| From: "Ben L. Harrison" <72440.2345@compuserve.com> |
| Date: 9/14/1995, 8:58 PM |
| To: "INTERNET:fanfic@andrew.cais.com" <fanfic@andrew.cais.com> |
Well I can't think of any improvements. I like the glossary you have been including in the story. Nice capsule pictures of Japanese culture and/or history.