Here is new version of the file. Unfortunately, I could not continue=20
this chapter without ruining it, so Chapter Five should be completed in=20
about 12 to 14 hours. It will give me just enough time to mail it before=
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I catch a plane back to Canada unless unforseen circumstances occur.
Anyways, as always, I need flames as well as constructive critism.
Ichinohei Hitomi
Hitomi_Ichinohei@MBnet.mb.ca
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A Son's Duty.
A fan fiction based on Takahashi Rumiko's ongoing Manga series, Ranma 1/2
Saotome Ranma, Saotome Genma, Saotome Nodoka, Tendo Akane, Tendo Soun,=20
Tendo Kasumi, Tendo Nabiki, Tendo Ranko, Kuonji Ukyou, Hibiki Ryouga,=20
P-chan, Shampoo, Mousse, Kunou Tatewaki, Kunou Kodachi, Kurenai Tsubasa,=20
and Hinako Sensei are copyright 1987, 1995 by Takahashi Rumiko.
Publishing rights:
Japan: Shogakukan Inc. Tokyo
Hong Kong: Jademan (Holdings) Ltd.
North America: Viz Inc.
Chapter Four:
As of yet, I like what you are doing with the story. I can't give you
more detailed comments for now. I will have to do that later (I
hope).
Anyhow, the reason for this response is that I wan't to know what kind
of text-editor you are using because I keep getting those =20 (as you
can see above). It's driving me nuts. It may be my mail server or
whatever. I just hope you can email me another copy because it is a
pain to read with those control (?) characters around.
Thanks again and keep up the good work.
Ja ne!