Groan!  Bad Bob!  Very bad!

<grins, bows>

In the moment of silence, one could hear the roars of the great
wyrms that had carried them to battle and which now circled the
building.

Our first clue...

Oddly, you're the first to notice the "wyrms"/"worms" bit.

the ultimate wizard.  But all our seers agreed -- he was not to
be born for another century!  Damn Lily Evans for her
disobedience!*

Heh.  For those who remember, this gives it away; your language is
identical.

I thought I might have overdone it there...

overwhelming the panicked murmurs of the onlookers.  "Because he
*is* the Quidditch Haderach!

And as I said, "GROAN!"

Precisely the reaction I wanted, of course!

Nice adaptation!

Thank you!  There are even more points of correspondence, by the
way -- no one who's read it has counted them all off to me, but
some are kind of subtle (like the vague phonetic/prosodic
resemblance between "Muad'dib" and "Boy-Who-Lived").  On the
other hand, some are actually quite blatant (short redhead in
black robes gives the final line).

-- Bob

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Bob Schroeck          http://www.eclipse.net/~rms           rms@eclipse.net
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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