Subject: [FFML] Re: [teaser][Ranma/Marvel]Prologue: Avenging Act 2 Chaper 9
From: DB Sommer
Date: 4/18/2006, 5:26 PM
To: rgorman@telusplanet.net
CC: ffml@anifics.com



David Johnston wrote:

DB Sommer wrote:



Crimson Commando had only a second to wonder what had happened to his 
adversary when he was struck from behind by a stun blast that 
rendered him unconscious.


I'd figure CC would be savvy enough to know that teleporters always 
reappear behind you.  Of course that doesn't mean he'd be able to 
swing his weapon around fast enough.


Interesting you should mention that as I have the huge battle planned 
out against the Avengers and that comes into play.



Sidewinder gasped as fifth member of Eyeshield suddenly� well, he 
didn�t exactly appear from nowhere, as if he had been invisible. Nor 
had he been moving at super speed and finally slowed down. It was 
like he had always been there and Sidewinder only happened to notice 
him because he had hit Black Racer.

�Get him!� Sidewinder shouted.


The mental image I have is Anonymous vanishing into a cloud of dust 
with  random body parts sticking out.  In fact I'm a bit surprised he 
didn't just crawl out.


% Heh. It was a temptation.




By this time the four petitioners had recovered and approached 
Sidewinder.

Fer De Lance was the first to speak. �That was a fluke. It wasn�t a 
true test of my abilities. I�ve killed dozens of people more powerful 
than that. Give me another--.�

�Relax,� Sidewinder smoothed. �You all passed.�

�But they defeated us,� Bushmaster pointed out.


Sidewinder:  Oh come on guys.  I let Princess Python in.  Did you 
really think you could fail?


% But once she pointed out her lack of abilities he admitted it was an 
oversight and mindwiped her and planned to ransom her off to the Circus 
of Crime. Not actually the best of ideas. While the Circus are a bunch 
of silly weenies, Ringmaster's hypnosis can be dangerous. Then again, he 
was also foolish enough to try and invite Viper into their ranks. Given 
her open nihlism and propensity to kill anyone at that drop of a hat 
(she killed the first Viper because she wanted to take the name), as 
well as desire to lead, he really needed to do better research.

% Thanks for the comments.

DB Sommer






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